Five good reasons to shut up about your Nano plans

1. They don’t matter. NaNo novels aren’t finished products. They’re hideous messes. Yet, it’s a popular activity that many published authors engage in (probably). Why? Because they prove something to you. The social aspect of having a website and hashtag and, well, Interweb just obscure the fact that NaNo is as personal a venture as anything can be. It doesn’t take a village to write fifty thousand words.

2. Remember that “writing” thing? There’s no reason to write nothing until November. If anything, now is a perfect time to figure out your voice and practice with sketches or exercises so you don’t fizzle out and spend the rest of your month whining or looking for prompts on the forums. Plus, speaking from experience, you need a certain amount of detail in mind to reach novel length.

3. Performance anxiety. NaNo is about quantity, not quality. If you get everyone and their mom hyped up about your idea, how easy will you find crapping out the first draft of that story?

4. You need to be excited through November. Okay, maybe you are self absorbed enough (or… fine, have a long enough attention span) to still be excited and fresh on November 29. But for the rest of humanity…. Make yourself anticipate. Rev up the engine, don’t burn half your fuel half a month out.

5. No, seriously. I don’t care. Finished products are where it’s at. If you can’t deliver, don’t make the promise… and it’s not deliverable until it’s done.


Stop Talking About NaNo

…and get writing already!

There are Tina Fey GIFs everywhere in this because Tina Fey is my lady-hero and that’s just something we all have to live with.

Okay, so I know NaNo isn’t for me, but I don’t think it’s wrong for others.

At least, I didn’t think it was wrong for others. Like, hey, if motivation is something you struggle with a lot—and for me, it’s all about the extrinsic rewards, the firm conviction that I can produce publishable work—then why not jump on the community support and get yourself revved up that way? Continue reading

How to write 70,000 words in 15 days

Okay, whew. This has been a long time coming. I originally meant to put it up after January 15th so we would have an objective idea of how successful something like this is, but Harper Voyager has put out an update so I’ve no idea when they will get back to me. Although it is nice to know they will be getting back eventually. (I like that they feel bad about a two-month response time to something like 4500 manuscripts. One of my friends has been waiting on poetry for almost a year.)


Before I get any further with this, though, I’d like to note something pretty important: I had no interfering commitments. After finishing up work, I’d just moved back in with the parents, plus I’m not in a relationship. If you want to spend this much time all in a chunk, you’d better not need to play with your kids or make ends meet, etc. Let’s face it, for the overwhelming majority of us, writing will never be the primary breadwinner. It’s a nice dream and there’s nothing wrong with working towards it, but don’t bet on it at the cost of everything else.


As you can see from this, it took me 14 actual days of writing and 17 days to push out 70,004 words, which then got edited into 80,000 words that I threw at Harper Voyager in the hopes they’ll think this business is saleable. YA sci-fi with all the themes and a socioeconomic minority lead? Let’s see how that goes. (And yes, there was an actual reason the main character is urban poor. I don’t do that for the sake of doing it.)


So anyway, once you’ve decided you won’t be breaking any hearts or getting tossed out on the street by doing something like this:

  • Have a real motivation. I find the chance to be published by one of the big six without first getting an agent very, very motivating. Since this kind of thing doesn’t happen every day, you need to figure out what will make you do it. Is it the fact that you’re finally on break and this is all the time you have? The fact that you’ve had this story idea for a long time and now you think you’re ready to make it happen? Internal or external, make sure you have a reason to keep going that you won’t argue yourself out of.
  • Be efficient. I took a break when I realized that sitting in front of a computer and trying to push words out was just getting things deleted. I needed to plan where things should go and reassess the middle of the story, and honestly I just needed a break from the damn thing. Once I got back to it, I did much better.
  • Don’t write just for the sake of writing. It’s one thing to do it during NaNo when the whole point is to get those words out, but in this case I was writing to show other people. I’m not a long-winded person (I used to be, and the results depressed me too much to keep doing it), and the first thing I always ask myself when writing is ‘why would anyone want to read this?’ I will say now that I don’t think the results came out badly. Voice is one of my strong points, though, so the plot is likely weaker than I think it is.
  • PLAN. I can’t say that much about good planning because, frankly, I’m awful at it, but I had the idea for this last year. So I knew exactly what I wanted from the setting, I knew the beginning and the end of the story down to the wording I wanted, I knew the characters and the voice I was going to write this with (although I did waver between past and present tense for an entire page). Where this will totally screw you over is when you get to 35,000 words and realize that you are out of ideas for where things should go in order to hit that all-important word count. Ooooops. Seriously, don’t just figure out point A to B, figure out what needs to happen in-between.
  • Take care of yourself. Take walks, exercise, eat regularly: all these basic things. If you get a headache, get off the computer. If your wrists starting hurting, go do something else. I set Word so I’m writing light text on a dark background, which does help with the eyestrain, but it still took me around five hours to write 7,000 words because I took breaks every thirty minutes. Also, F.lux is awesome. I mentioned the mental side of it above, but yeah: health matters.
  • Have fun! Okay, so it totally borders on tedious at times and that’s why that external motivation was so necessary for me, but still. This is your story, you’re doing it because you want to, you should enjoy it.


As always, discussion welcome.


Okay, so I wrote the thing (15 days), took a couple days off to clean the brain (reread all of His Dark Materials by Philip Pullman), made notes everywhere, revised, reread, SUBMITTED.


I have a lot to say about all this–and I bet a fair bit of it will help NaNoers or people who can’t decide–but I’m also leaving the country for a month in like four days and I have other commitments. So if anyone has specific questions, please go for it here! I’ll get to as many as I can, assuming there’s more than two ;p

70,004 words in 15 days.

Yeah, don’t do that.

As you can see from this, my motivation just goes on a steady downward trend after a while. And part of that was realizing that I’d only allowed for about 50,000 words of plot and just needed to think about where I wanted the themes to bunch up and what the conflicts should be, but the rest of it was me being like OH GOD I AM SICK OF WRITING.
I’m not the best at focusing ever, and you can bet that I’m going to spend the next few days doing non-writing things (drawing, web designing, and Photoshopping) while I clear my head before editing this all in like three days or whatever and then sacrificing to the book gods as I submit it to Harper Collins Voyager. (Note, 70,000 words on the computer is maybe a two hour read for me.)


But anyway, I really really really recommend against this. One because it’s annoying and two because it’s straight up unhealthy. Wrists, back, neck, butt, eyes–by the end I was taking a lot of exercise breaks.


Don’t procrastinate your books.


More on how I actually managed to get this done, despite the whining above. I’ll have some tips that could be useful for you NaNo writers.

National Novel Writing Month (NaNoWriMo)

I swear the word ‘November’ fit into there somewhere…anyway. Depending on the websites you frequent, NaNoWriMo is either a huge deal or one of those background things that’s viewed with a vague contempt because We’re Better Than That.

Personally, it does nothing for me. I’ve done the rush thing, gotten it all out in 15 days (it was only 69,000 words and I was unemployed, okay?!)…and ended up with utter crap. Which, I am given to understand, is somewhat the point: not to produce any kind of masterpiece or thing worthy of publication, but to show yourself that you can indeed write a novel if you just get your ass down to it! And, of course, it comes with the whole communal sharing of experience thing, which despite my “best” efforts this blog hasn’t done….


Obviously, I don’t have a whole lot to say right now…so I’d like to hear it from you: whether you’ve participated, how successful you think it would be for you, &c. &c.



Quick tip! Turn your page background dark…it’s much better on the eyes.